SUCK IT UP Sonny Jim. Please critique my comic, Good Taste.

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SUCK IT UP Sonny Jim. Please critique my comic, Good Taste.

Post  tara on Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:52 pm

Please, indeed! Take a look at my comic and tell me what you think, thank you kindly!! I know it's slow going, but give it a shot.

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Post  greven on Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:07 pm

Well someone gotta man up and do this, so I will Very Happy

It is okay. It is filled of both ups and downs.
There are some really good character pieces, like the guy eating alone at the huge table. but it is hard to tell the characters from each other some times, and it can get confusing at times.
The lack of color actually defeats it a bit, as you pretty much only have the hair to tell people apart from, and we get a lot of people thrown at us very fast.
All in all, its decent, ive read better, but I have also read worse.

That is what I got.
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Post  tara on Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:58 am

Thank yeh!
I've been working on trying to make people look different from people, but I suppose it's in subtle ways that I only notice. XD
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Post  greven on Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:31 am

Not to beat a dead horse or anything, but you did a better job with Listen to Yer Mama.

It had real potential to go big: you had good character, awesome art, sex, lesbians, strange creatures, sex, the whole marige thing to work out, an adopted child, sex and a funny spin on fary tales, it could have been soooooo much more than it is.
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Post  tara on Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:50 am

I thought the art was crap in that, actually. XD And I only had that one story for those characters. But thanks? I think.
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Post  greven on Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:31 am

I loved the art, it was really unique and I felt that the story wasnt even over, he found his brother but we never had any closesure at all Sad
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Post  tara on Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:39 am

They lived happily ever after! ;D

Don't worry (I don't know why you would be!, but yeah), my next comic may be more to your tastes. Will be in full colour, more off the wall character designs, incest, less characters, beheadings... no lesbians at this point, though, sorry.
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Post  greven on Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:29 am

Lol. what an epic ending. Totally original Very Happy Razz

Why the hell did you throw incest in as a selling point XD
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Post  tara on Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:48 am

Hey! It's a comic derived from nursery rhymes, how original can that be.

Drama!!
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Post  greven on Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:51 am

Hehe true. Laughing
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Post  Guest on Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:32 pm

I actually am beginning the archives of your comic Listen to your Mama. So i haven't gotten to Good Taste yet. But I'm gettin there.

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Post  tara on Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:23 am

Kay! Thanks!
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Post  Fly Hue on Fri Apr 24, 2009 11:15 pm

Ha. Finally got around to gathering up the energy to say something! XD I've been meaning to...

All I want to say is that my only complaint would be that some of the scenes move by too fast. It can get a bit confusing at times. But I have the same problem, so it's no biggie, just something to aim at improving. Other than that, lovelovelove it. It's honestly one of my favorite comics on the Duck. Like, when I see there's an update, my heart beats a little bit faster for a moment.
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Post  Guest on Mon Apr 27, 2009 12:32 am

ok, i've finished up til good taste in food. I really like the guys four and spencer (did i get that right? couldn't tell what was first and last names.) I actually think the pacing is pretty good, not too fast or slow (maybe it gets speedier later on). My only suggestion (and maybe this is changes later on) would be to convey more movement. Like when the teacher pulled the bag and "accidentally" dropped its contents, I didn't get the sense of what happened until everything was on the floor. Maybe some white lines to convey quick movement, those white stars to convey a hit or bam. other than that i haven't read far enough to comment on the story cuz its just beginning. farao

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Post  tara on Mon Apr 27, 2009 6:54 pm

Yeah in the inking/colouring style I use, it's difficult to convey movement. For some reason speed lines just seem to ... melt into the picture. Plus I'm not really used to drawing speed lines. XD

Thanks!! I really appreciate the time you took.
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