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Post  greven on Fri May 15, 2009 6:41 pm

STORY NUMBER 1

I have pondered about writing a Yaoi story for a week or so now, and I have decided that I think I am ready. So now I have done it, written yaoi, I dont hope or think that anyone will get offended by this, but here it is:
NaruSasu -Yaoi - Mature
Alternate link (not DA): NaruSaku Yaoi



STORY NUMBER 2

I think this story is well okay. I spot some mistakes that I will fix when it is not the middle of the night before and exam but what the F.
It is a mature story so take care out there okay, also I couldnt come up with a title sooo yeah.
Martin and Jill



STORY NUMBER 3

So this was actually kind of a request from another DA user, so I thought I would give it a spin and here you have it. A new Yaoi story Smile This pairing is Orochimaru and Kabuto from Naruto. It is Yaoi, and it is very expliscit.
DA link: 2 Snakes
Alternate Link (Not DA): 2 Snakes (NOT DA)


Hope you like it. Would be really epic if I was actually able to turn one of you on through my stories XD
I know it wont happen but if it does happen can you PLEASE PLEASE tell me? I would just like to know Smile



STORY NUMBER 4

I mananged to blackmail myself into writing this story, but truth be told: I had a blast writing it Very Happy ......... and a boner.
It is a One Piece Fanfic based around 2 things: GenderBending and Zoro X Luffy. enjoy Very Happy
DA link: One Piece - ZoroXLuffy - Adult
Alternate Link: One Piece - ZoroXLuffy - adult (alternate link. no age restrictino.)



STORY NUMBER 5

Okay I got in a Harry Potter art trade and since I cant do art I did a little HarryXDraco story as my part of the deal Very Happy
It came out pretty good, I think Smile
And while I dont usually do the pairing as it seems too "out there" I managed to make it seem plausible at least, thereby making it tolerable at least. Please go on and comment if you actually read it, because I have no idea if you read these or not.

This thing turned into a trillogy somewhere along the way so I am putting up the 2 other parts as well Smile

Part 1
DA link: HarryXDraco - Broken Leg
Alternate link: HarryXDraco - Broken Leg (alternate link. No age restriction.)

Part 2
DA link: HarryXDraco - Hogwarts express (No age restriction)
Alternate link: HarryXDraco - Hogwarts express (alternate link. No age restriction.)

Part 3
DA link: HarryXDraco - Reunited
Alternate link: HarryXDraco - Reunited (Alternate link. No age restrictions)



NEW STORY!!! STORY NUMER 6

Okay I actually want some feed back from you girls on this one. Because I want to know how a story like this is recieved by you girls who actually know what I am writing about. I got some help from Shia as to the sensations and such but really the rest I just tried my luck, so I was wondering if you could tell me if this interested you. Seeing that I believe there was pretty much agreement on the terrible lesbian porn in one thread, it was too manly I believe was the problem. But anyway, I tried to strike a balance between realism and... well sex Razz
DA link:NaruHina - Yuri for love
Alternate link: NaruHina - Yuri for love (alternate link. No age restriction)


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Post  shia on Sun May 17, 2009 1:16 pm

Ooh, congrats on writing yaoi.
-squees quietly-

I'll read it when there aren't... people around.
Probably later today.
=D
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Post  greven on Sun May 17, 2009 1:17 pm

Okay Very Happy
For easier acces I am going to link to the DA placing, I ended up putting it there anyway XD
Just check the link in the first post of the thread
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Post  Guest on Sun May 17, 2009 1:55 pm

I read it. I liked it. It's very good. A little gratuitous, a little romantic, and a whole lotta sexy. Very nice! Surprised rabbit

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Post  greven on Sun May 17, 2009 2:20 pm

What does Gratuitous mean? I wanted the sex to be meaningful more than just two guys going at it.
Here is an interesting question: Who would I rather be in that situation? Like if I was one of these two people? The Seme (naruto) or the Uke (Sasuke)?
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Post  shia on Sun May 17, 2009 2:46 pm

Hmm, that was good. ^^
I wonder... how did you feel while writing it?
Were you nervous? Cause you used only euphemisms mostly. xD Not that that's a bad thing.
So, how would you answer your question?
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Post  greven on Sun May 17, 2009 3:04 pm

I felt really good, I had been wanting to write it for a while, just didnt have the balls to do so.
Euphenisms? Like saying "star" instead of ass and stuf? That was because I think ass and Dick and words like that are porn words, words that kills the love in the action and makes it more about the sex, and you have read the porn thread, it is all about the love for me Smile

You misunderstood me, I know who I would rather be, I just want to see if you can guess who I would rather be Smile
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Post  shia on Sun May 17, 2009 3:18 pm

Oh, that's great then. =D
I know what you mean by porn words. It does make your fic more romantic. ^^

Oh. xD
Uhhh.
I DON'T KNOW.
Ummm.
Uke?
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Post  greven on Sun May 17, 2009 4:05 pm

Dammit! am I really that see through?

I was really hoping that you would answer seme because then I would post something like this.

Actually I would rather be the Uke Embarassed
Just to be hold in those strong arms feeling all my worries disappear, feeling safe. Being reasured of his love through his actions, and feeling him inside me as we kiss and cuddle, and ultimately falling asleep in his warm embrase.


And Then I would hope to get a lot of messages like: "Ohh that is so sweet." Or "that sounds so romantic <3" or something like that.
But you have ruined my plan! XD
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Post  shia on Sun May 17, 2009 4:38 pm

Wahahahaha, that's evil me! >D

But really, that is sweet. ^^ I love how you planned it all out, haha.
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Post  greven on Sun May 17, 2009 4:40 pm

Personally I find that to be rather pathetic of me XD
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Post  shia on Sun May 17, 2009 4:42 pm

No, not pathetic. xD
I do things like that all the time.
... unless that means I'm pathetic too! OH NO.
Let's be pathetic buddies. Maybe. Wow, that sounded even more pathetic.
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Post  greven on Mon May 18, 2009 4:59 pm

Okay i have added a link to a New very MATURE story in the first post. If you are the first to read it then dont ruin the fun for the rest of the users. Let me know what you think but be subtle XD
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Post  eSilva on Mon May 18, 2009 5:06 pm

omg...you're a just a BIT pathetic greven but is a very common place way; as in I've done it before too. Brave for fessing up to it tho! gave me a good laugh. (referring to your uke seme topic)
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Post  shia on Tue May 19, 2009 11:29 am

I'm at school... I will definitely read when I get home!
And I'll make sure not to ruin it. xD I guess I'll just message my review to you.
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Post  greven on Tue May 19, 2009 1:00 pm

Lol okay Very Happy
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Post  greven on Sun May 24, 2009 7:38 pm

Yay Smile I have written a new Yaoi story. For more information read the first post of this thread or read the artist comments after the jump.

DA link:2 Snakes
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Post  greven on Thu Jun 18, 2009 4:34 am

NEW STORY!!! STORY NUMBER 4

I mananged to blackmail myself into writing this story, but truth be told: I had a blast writing it Very Happy ......... and a boner.
It is a One Piece Fanfic based around 2 things: GenderBending and Zoro X Luffy. enjoy Very Happy
DA link: One Piece - ZoroXLuffy - Adult
Alternate Link: One Piece - ZoroXLuffy - adult (alternate link. no age restriction.)


I actually really like this one Very Happy
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Post  greven on Thu Jun 25, 2009 4:34 pm

I feel I am being ignored in my perversion here
XD
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Post  greven on Fri Jul 10, 2009 4:19 pm

Okay I am aware that I am probably speaking to deaf ears here, at least it would seem I do BUT!

NEW STORY!!! STORY NUMBER 5

Okay I got in a Harry Potter art trade and since I cant do art I did a little HarryXDraco story as my part of the deal Very Happy
It came out pretty good, I think Smile
And while I dont usually do the pairing as it seems too "out there" I managed to make it seem plausible at least, thereby making it tolerable at least. Please go on and comment if you actually read it, because I have no idea if you read these or not.
DA link: HarryXDraco - Broken Leg
Alternate Link: HarryXDraco - Broken Leg (alternate link. No age restriction.)
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Post  alain1609 on Fri Jul 10, 2009 8:48 pm

that's not true, like i said a long time ago show me your pieces and i'll be sure to read them, i did(i've been doing it for a long time) and i belive i left a few coomments in devian art, so you're not posting in vain.

i should probably have posted something everytime i read it but i'm lazy and i didn't quite understand some words so i had to look them up in my very reliable english-english diccionary(cambridge). well them i'm off to read the ones you just posted.
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Post  greven on Sat Jul 11, 2009 3:46 am

Well I dont know what your name is on DA so that might be why I dont know you have commented, go put down your name here if you dont mind: http://true2ourhearts.forumotion.com/clubhouse-f2/deviant-art-t18.htm
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Post  greven on Sun Jul 12, 2009 3:59 pm

This HarryXDraco thing turned into a trillogy somewhere along the way so I am putting up the 2 other parts as well Smile
Plz enjoy Smile


Part 1
DA link: HarryXDraco - Broken Leg
Alternate link: HarryXDraco - Broken Leg (alternate link. No age restriction.)

Part 2
DA link: HarryXDraco - Hogwarts express (No age restriction)
Alternate link: HarryXDraco - Hogwarts express (alternate link. No age restriction.)

Part 3
DA link: HarryXDraco - Reunited
Alternate link: HarryXDraco - Reunited (Alternate link. No age restrictions)
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Post  greven on Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:43 am

NEW STORY!!! STORY NUMER 6

Okay I actually want some feed back from you girls on this one. Because I want to know how a story like this is recieved by you girls who actually know what I am writing about. I got some help from Shia as to the sensations and such but really the rest I just tried my luck, so I was wondering if you could tell me if this interested you. Seeing that I believe there was pretty much agreement on the terrible lesbian porn in one thread, it was too manly I believe was the problem. But anyway, I tried to strike a balance between realism and... well sex Razz
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