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Under the Rain

Post  Lunaris on Sun May 31, 2009 1:06 am

I felt like posting something quick and simple. My writing style lends itself much better to long rants, short stories, and novels. Tonight, though, I was looking at some poems I'd written for an ex and thought I'd put one up. I'll probably never touch it again, but it has sentimental value.

Falling on the window sill
The rain yet brings another thrill
Pittering, pattering, such a sound
Against the glass and on the ground
Downpour running off in streams
Adding sweetness to the dreams
Memories of when we first met
In the rain and pouring wet
Wiped the water from my eyes
Now I see the crystal skies
All uncertain, I do not care
I will smile because you're there
Falling on my window still
A shiver now, a lonely chill
Outside the house a lonely storm
When you arrive to keep me warm
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Post  Guest on Sun May 31, 2009 4:58 am

Thank you for sharing! This poem is lovely and i can "hear" and "feel" the rain in the poem. Your emotions are quite palpable.

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Post  greven on Sun May 31, 2009 8:07 am

Smile Very good poem, I like it Smile
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Post  alain1609 on Thu Jun 04, 2009 9:20 pm

i like the poem, very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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