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Emma Clare poem

Post  tommym on Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:05 pm

EMMA CLARE

Emma's Mom Majored in Art or so once
I thought, Frequently, Repeatedly, through a
Layered Sky Angel Dusted haze of Photons passing a
Meshed P.C. screen Emma creates designs I have never seen

Many times, many times, I await so patiently
Serenely, ever so calmly, Many times thoughts of
On coming (at the near speed of skullbie)
Avatars, Images, Postings,and Comments confuse me

Marching around nervously. I wander and
Ponder. Will Janey become to at ease?Will Sarah see
Victory? Stacey's in Chem class mixing a toxic med.
Pretty Please Sky Angel Emma save Janey fore she's dead

Around the Planet each and every single day
Harming harping enduring, repeatedly the same sexist creed
Existing solely to surpress WOMEN's RIGHT to LOVE
One more horrid belief good willed people don't need

Concern by those who do right and loath the horrid
Sadistic Violence that MEN do! mega million times a day
Love will do battle! Love will not wither away! Our
Great gains do start in a gray scaled pencil kinda way

Lalyla and Shanna, Avie and Clare, Sarah's
In Janey's way Janey is not really there.
Aiding expressions of inhibitions gone overly
Rampant "Candy is dandy but liquor is quicker"

Answering the call to combat hate mongers. Who in
Reality run a propaganda game. Pencils in hand
You Emma Sky and Rei rise to the occasion in Freedom's name
Look! A Forum and it's so True to our Hearts

Reaching out to all! Clare see's a latch key door,
Running late to class with Leigh and Jen a ghost again
Laying behind a secret chamber door. Clare now enters,
"A Room With A View" pulling out her beloved Doll

Enticingly smiling, glad to see Clare, She doll's
Dreaming up many events to turn into Magic
Alone Clare uses a pencil and becomes ecstatic
My Lesbian Pirate girlfriend and I go Galactic!
Tommym//Tammy


Last edited by tommym on Sat May 29, 2010 1:02 pm; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : mispellings)

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Re: Emma Clare poem

Post  ReiDavidson on Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:37 am

*stands up and cheers* Beautiful!!
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Re: Emma Clare poem

Post  Skyangel on Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:00 am

Wow that's quite amazing!! You have put so much effort and feeling into this. Smile

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Post  Emilyelizabethx on Sun Mar 01, 2009 6:36 am

That was fantastic! Very Happy Really lovely!
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Post  Joneko on Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:10 pm

I almost cheered out loud for this a little. Very nice build to your enthusiasm. X3
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Re: Emma Clare poem

Post  greven on Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:21 pm

There is clearly something I am not getting here, because I just cant seem to find any meaning in this poem. Sorry, it just doesnt do anything for me.

But dont worry, by the sound of the ladies you have got yourself something good here.
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Post  Joneko on Sun Mar 01, 2009 6:24 pm

I know I missed a lot of the content, though I also know why. But the reason I found it so good, in part, was because, even though I was unfamiliar with some of the topics discussed, her energy still made me want to shout at the end. Though I have fundamental problems with the slight anti-male bit, but that doesn't/shouldn't have an affect on how I view/critique it as art.
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